JDRF Ad Book Submission
Scott Benner
I am working on an ad for our local JDRF Promise Ball. Please leave your feedback, comments, suggestions and more below. I’d like to make this as memorable as I can so that folks will think to add us on Twitter and/or check out the site the next day. The ad is 6 5/8 x 3 3/8.
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Mom McGee
Of course the pictures are wonderful!!!
I think that the font on the paragraph should be a little bit bigger. Also the info on the bottom of the card, which is in pink, I think that it should be a shade darker or the blue color. As it, it doesn't stand out.
Love Mom
I think that the font on the paragraph should be a little bit bigger. Also the info on the bottom of the card, which is in pink, I think that it should be a shade darker or the blue color. As it, it doesn't stand out.
Love Mom
Friday, March 26, 2010 - 01:15 PM
Hey There,
You need to use a sans serif font center the Arden has type 1 diabetes or flush left before Arden's head. the middle text needs to at least 2pt bigger and Mom is right use a darker shade of pink for learn more about arden's day at the bottom try getting the pink off of her shirt that would probably work better.
Gina
@ginacaps
You need to use a sans serif font center the Arden has type 1 diabetes or flush left before Arden's head. the middle text needs to at least 2pt bigger and Mom is right use a darker shade of pink for learn more about arden's day at the bottom try getting the pink off of her shirt that would probably work better.
Gina
@ginacaps
Friday, March 26, 2010 - 01:30 PM
Weren't you a graphic designer once? Barb
what they said. Plus...my thought is give them a compelling reason to visit ardensday. Maybe one or two sentences that says what content they will find.
Also, not sure if altruism is the right word....actually, I have a ton of thoughts and bouncing them with a conversation is always more productive. give me a shout and I'll give you my two dollars worth (two cents is inflated these days). oxoxox
what they said. Plus...my thought is give them a compelling reason to visit ardensday. Maybe one or two sentences that says what content they will find.
Also, not sure if altruism is the right word....actually, I have a ton of thoughts and bouncing them with a conversation is always more productive. give me a shout and I'll give you my two dollars worth (two cents is inflated these days). oxoxox
Friday, March 26, 2010 - 03:43 PM
Scott...the immediate above was Barb. Sorry, that got cut off. Barb Peachey Colbert that is.
Friday, March 26, 2010 - 03:55 PM
love the pictures, dont like the word altruism, everyone wont know what it means
Friday, March 26, 2010 - 04:20 PM
I'd lose the 2nd sentence and increase the font size on the first sentence so it is easier to read. Less is more. The first sentence captures exactly what you are looking for. And the bottom pink should be the same color as Arden's shirt as the above mentioned
Friday, March 26, 2010 - 09:09 PM
i love it. just make the words bigger and change the bottom to a the blue on the top.
Friday, March 26, 2010 - 09:51 PM
Thanks to everyone. New version will be online soon. Your help has been great!
Saturday, March 27, 2010 - 08:53 PM